- Course 5: Part 2—Developing an Inclusive Writing Style
- Learning Exercise: Sentences
Edit the following sentences to make them clearer. After each question, click on ‘Hint’ to see a suggested edited version of the sentence.
Learning Exercise: Sentences
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Question 1 of 5
The team of which we are members was taking measurements of end-user satisfaction with care of those patients who were seen in our cardiology department.
Grading can be reviewed and adjusted.Grading can be reviewed and adjusted.
This response will be awarded full points automatically, but it can be reviewed and adjusted after submission.
Suggestion: Our team measured how satisfied cardiology patients were with the care they received.
Question 2 of 5
There will be a chance at our next meeting to bring to the table any responses to the new charting regulations re: workload realities.Grading can be reviewed and adjusted.Grading can be reviewed and adjusted.
Suggestion: At our next meeting please tell us how the new charting regulations are affecting your workload.
Question 3 of 5
All those who are averse to the proposed idea of changing the weekly staff meeting from Tuesday mornings to Wednesday mornings please make your concerns known to your immediate supervisor.Grading can be reviewed and adjusted.Grading can be reviewed and adjusted.
Suggestion: If anyone has any concerns with the proposal to change the weekly staff meeting to Wednesday mornings please let your supervisor know.
Question 4 of 5
Semi-annual performance reviews on the practical side of things are now approaching; a sign-up sheet can be found at the reception desk for you.Grading can be reviewed and adjusted.Grading can be reviewed and adjusted.
Suggestion: It is time for our semi-annual practical skills performance review; you can sign up on the sheet at the reception desk.
Question 5 of 5
A representative from the working group is needed to attend the meeting of the sterling committee next month, and anyone wishing to willingly volunteer in this capacity is appreciated.Grading can be reviewed and adjusted.Grading can be reviewed and adjusted.
We need a representative from the working group to attend the steering committee meeting next month. If you are willing to volunteer, we thank you.